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Friday, May 5th, 2006How To Create Amazingly Seductive Offers Only a Moron
Could Resist!
Copyright © 2006 Quick Turn Marketing International,
Ltd.
Have you seen the movie “The Godfather”?
It’s a brilliant movie, filled with great scenes,
great lines, and great characters. One of the most
memorable pieces of dialogue is spoken by Don Corleone
after he’s asked how he will convince someone to do
something that person would prefer not to do. The
Godfather replies,
“I’m going to make him an offer he can’t refuse.”
Essentially, the old man is saying, “He better buy
what I’m selling… or he’s dead meat.” I gotta admit,
this approach is a little extreme and probably not
something you want to try in your business, but it is
a perfect example of an irresistible offer!
An irresistible offer is an “invitation” that is so
clearly compelling, so powerful, and so obviously
attractive that no one in his/her mind could refuse.
That’s the kind of offer you want to make, too.
Personally, I like to create the offer FIRST before I
put my fingers on the keyboard or write a single word
of copy. The initial idea for an offer may come
quickly, but I may spend days just thinking about it,
brainstorming it, framing it and re-framing it, and
playing around with different combination of offers.
Once you’ve got a handle on your irresistible offer,
the rest comes easy…
If your offer is “hot,” your sales copy will
practically write itself and it will easily bring an
avalanche of sales. If your offer is weak, no magic
“phrases and words” are going to save you.
That’s how important a well-thought out,
well-articulated offer is! So the million-dollar
question is: how can you make your offers amazingly
seductive?
Here’re some “Whip Up An Immediate Buying Frenzy” tips
that I’ve learned over the years…
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Whip It Up #1 -Don’t Be A Victim of “Human Nature” -
Get Readers to Act NOW
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It’s human nature to procrastinate. People need that
extra “nudge.” If your prospect doesn’t take action
the instant he/she is finished reading your ad copy,
there’s a fat chance you’ll lose your prospect’s
enthusiasm, interest, and ultimately the sale.
You can achieve immediate action by either having a
deadline or a limited quantity or preferably both!
Below is a good example from http://www.wizardtalk.com
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Urgent! Time Sensitive Message…
It’ll cost you nothing to get started. Plus, if you’re
not satisfied… for any reason or no reason at all…
you’ll pay nothing ever - guaranteed! (Please read
this entire message right away because, this offer is
extremely limited and may expire for good on DATE!)”
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You can’t afford to let your prospect “think about
it.” You don’t want them to wait till tomorrow, til
the day afer, or even one extra minute because they
might get distracted or change their minds. You want
them to whip out their plastics and order NOW!!!
Here’s a mathematical formula you need to know: Delay
= Lost Sales. And here’s the flipside: Fast Action =
Big Money.
State all the specific benefits they’ll get from
taking action now… Remind them what they will ‘lose’
or miss out by not responding… Have a clearly defined
time limit… Do everything you possibly can do get them
to ACT now!
You can also make your prospects stand-up and take
action now by making your bonuses a limited time
offer… This means if prospects order by a certain
date, they’ll get a bouquet of bonus stuff.
Which leads to the next trick…
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Whip It Up #2 - Overload Your Prospects With Bonuses
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If you really want to give your readers and hot-foot
and send them running to place an order, beef up your
offer with high-perceived-value bonuses…
How valuable should the bonus be? Your prospect should
feel that he/she will be rewarded with 2, 5, 10, or
20 times the value of the cost of the main item.
I was watching TV the other night and was absolutely
glued to the information that was on…
Okay, stop laughing. For your information, I like to
watch infomercials MUCH more than regular shows…
they’re just awesome…and the learning opportunity is
unbelievable. (And I’ve even scored a few great
products through the years, too!)
Anyway, I was watching the Ronco Six Star Cutlery
infomercial… And Ron Popeil, the father of all
pitchmen — Pocket Fisherman, is a personal favorite
– was pitching his Showtime knife set (carefully, of
course, so as not to cut anyone!)…
Pitchmaster Ron was talking about how you can get the
Showtime knife for only 3 easy payments of $13.33… (I
said to myself… that’s a little pricey, but I know
there’s a ton more goodies coming, so I waited… Okay
Ron, show me what you got!)
And then, of course, Ron said, “But wait, there’s
more!”
Ron promised: “You’ll also get the Carving knife…
you’ll get the Large Filet knife… you’ll get the Bread
and Bagel knife… you’ll get the Bread and Bagel knife…
you’ll get the Chef’s knife… you’ll get the saw knife…
you’ll the boning knife… you’ll get the sportsman’s
knife… you’ll get the chop n’ server knife… all for
only for only 3 easy payments of $13.33!”
(You feel the urge the pick up the phone and just dial
the number yourself, don’t you?)
But wait, there’s EVEN MORE! That Ron Popeil is a
“black belt” in the “Bonus Arts”!
“You’ll also get the Cheese knife….” says Ron.
“You’ll get the cleaver… you’ll the carving fork…
you’ll get the utility knife… you’ll get the paring
knife… you’ll get the garnishing knife… you’ll get the
poultry sheers plus you’ll GET 8 friggin’ steak
knives… ALL FOR ONLY 3 easy payments of $13.33!!!
“Good heavens, haven’t you picked up the phone yet?
You must hurry up because there’s only 2 minutes left…
1:59… 1:58… 1:57… 1:56… hurry up, time is running out,
so start dialing and order NOW.”
Well, I am teasing you a bit… this isn’t exactly Ron’s
pitch… But you get the idea, right?
A Bonus on Bonuses: whenever you add bonuses to your
offer… you must work just as hard selling the bonuses
as you do selling your product or service!
We talked earlier about the best bonuses having a high
perceived-value. That doesn’t happen by magic. You
must build the value in the mind of your prospects…
tell them the worth — financial (tangible) and
emotional — of EACH bonus item and what’s special
about them individually and collectively…
Back to Ron and his Showtime knife… …
After he’s described in the bonuses in extensive and
colorful detail, now Ron has got an amazing offer to
share. He’s not just selling a bunch of knives for $42
bucks. No way! He’s offering you a $852.75 value for
only 3 easy payments of $13.33.
By factoring in the enormous combined value of the
bonuses, Ron makes it seem as though you’re getting
the original product for free… and then some!
And here’s the beauty part: you can pretty much set
the value at any reasonable level you like. What you
paid for the bonus doesn’t matter…
What matters is the worth of the bonus to the
consumer. So can you see how much more “convincing”
your offer becomes when you assign a specific value to
your bonuses?
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Whip It Up #3 - Make Your Offer As Risk-Free As
Possible
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“Doubting Thomas” is a Biblical figure… the Apostle
who would not believe the resurrection of Jesus until
he saw Jesus with his own eyes. But “Doubting Thomas”
is also with us today, thousands of years later, alive
and well and living in the hearts of consumers, both
male and female.
Today, everyone is a Doubting Thomas or Thomasina.
Based on centuries of past experience, your prospects
are very skeptical of sales offers. They don’t trust
the offer and they don’t trust you. They’ve been
burned too many times before. They’re afraid of making
a bad decision.
Most importantly, they’re afraid of making a mistake.
Very often, the fear of making a mistake is exactly is
what prevents people from buying. So acknowledge that
fear… face it head on… and then blow it out of the
water by taking the risk off the shoulders of your
prospect.
If you can turn the risk of loss from your prospects
to yourself — if you can say to consumers, “I’m the
loser if you don’t like what you ordered because I’ll
refund every penny you paid” — you’ll both end up
winners.
Lots of offers have a “money back guarantee” and that
takes away some of the risk. But, if you really want
to explode a consumer’s doubt, make your offer better
than risk-free.
Here are two risk-removing offers. Which one gets your
vote… in dollars?
30-Day Money-Back Guarantee
“Every one of our Widget Executive Pen and Pencil Sets
comes with a 30-day money-back guarantee. If you don’t
find that you’re writing better, writing faster, and
writing neater with your Widget… if you are not
completely satisfied with your purchase for any
reason… simply return it within 30 days for a full
refund of the purchase price.”
Lifetime Guarantee
“Every one of our Widget Executive Pen and Pencil Sets
comes with a lifetime guarantee on the mechanics.
Should your pen or pencil ever develop mechanical
problems simply return it and we’ll replace it with a
new one. You have nothing to lose so order now…”
That lifetime guarantee is pretty powerful stuff isn’t
it? Let’s you envision yourself writing away happily
for the rest of your days on earth.
Kinda makes you feel “safe” to order now, doesn’t it?
So there you have it, the “easy as 1-2-3″ ways to
create an amazingly seductive offer no ane person can
refuse! They’ll be calling you the Svengali of the
Market in no time!
Remember though… use your powers for good!
Yours in marketing madness,
Dan Lok
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A former college dropout, Dan Lok transformed himself
from a grocery bagger in a local supermarket to a
multi-millionaire. Dan came to North America with
little knowledge of the English language and few contacts.
Today, Dan is one of the most sought-after business
mentors on the Web, as well as a best-selling author.
His reputation includes his title as the World’s #1
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